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fox ([personal profile] fox) wrote2010-10-23 10:04 pm

your attention please

The word "we" can't be your predicate. Sorry. Nothing is "thanks to we the people" or "because of we the savers". The pronoun you're looking for is "us".

Yes, "us the people" sounds silly. This might mean you need to rethink the thing at the sentence level.

Many thanks.
starfish: Attack!Siamese (Monty Python-esque) (RARRRR)

[personal profile] starfish 2010-10-24 02:40 am (UTC)(link)
Now I have the damn Preamble song stuck in my head.

...establish justice, ensure domestic tranquilitee-ee-yeah...
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[personal profile] thalia 2010-10-24 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad it's not just me.

[ETA: Oops, that was meant to be a reply to [personal profile] starfish. It's possible that I've had too much alcohol to safely use a computer.]
Edited 2010-10-24 03:25 (UTC)