fox: flying anglia: second star to the right and straight on till morning. (anglia)
fox ([personal profile] fox) wrote2003-11-09 02:41 am

for [personal profile] emrinalexander and [personal profile] darthrami

for nansi: Credulity and Conviction. harry/snape.

for rami: Best Man. snape/harry.

thanks to [livejournal.com profile] resonant8, [livejournal.com profile] ellen_fremedon, [livejournal.com profile] bethbethbeth, [livejournal.com profile] rahalia_cat, and [livejournal.com profile] lexin.
axiom_of_stripe: DC Comics: Kory cries "X'Hal!" (Default)

[personal profile] axiom_of_stripe 2003-11-09 10:37 am (UTC)(link)
cool! i especially liked the water goblet image and the "very proud" repetition at the reception. ;)

[identity profile] darthfox.livejournal.com 2003-11-09 04:49 pm (UTC)(link)
even though the water goblet thing is in amongst the stuff you once told me was sugar-coated sugar and demanded to know what i'd done with Fox?

:-D

i'm pleased that the final products meet with your approval.
axiom_of_stripe: DC Comics: Kory cries "X'Hal!" (Default)

[personal profile] axiom_of_stripe 2003-11-10 09:09 am (UTC)(link)
even though the water goblet thing is in amongst the stuff you once told me was sugar-coated sugar and demanded to know what i'd done with Fox?

;)

yes, actually, because it's all about context. i like the pacing and context in this final version a lot!

[identity profile] darthfox.livejournal.com 2003-11-10 09:18 am (UTC)(link)
note to readership: between [livejournal.com profile] cmshaw reading an early draft and pronouncing the first scene "sugar-coated sugar" and the posting of the final story, the first scene changed not at all.

:-D

the context did change, though, i guess, as more scenes were added. so, okay. fair point. you can have that one.
axiom_of_stripe: DC Comics: Kory cries "X'Hal!" (Default)

[personal profile] axiom_of_stripe 2003-11-10 09:35 am (UTC)(link)
hmmmph. ;)