I read it. It sucks. I kept thinking to myself, WHERE is she getting this characterization? From the bottom of a Cracker Jack box? Sentences that go halfway wherever they're headed and end. Other sentences looking like she cut them in half and capped the first word, they're that inarticulate.
I just don't get it. She's supposed to be an adult, right? Not an eleven year old. Rosie wrote better than that when she was eleven.
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(Anonymous) 2004-04-28 08:32 am (UTC)(link)I just don't get it. She's supposed to be an adult, right? Not an eleven year old. Rosie wrote better than that when she was eleven.
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